My family

WALT:  organises our ideas in our writing  into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or one person at a time



My family
In my family I have mum dad and two older  sisters and me

My dad's name is Les my dad is a plaster, he helped  to make lots of building. When he has time off work he likes to fish, sometimes he take me. my dad's like boxing he teaches Me.  every  night he watches boxing . my dad is from a Village in Samoa .

My mum is called Sharee She likes bees.  My mum loves plants when it is a nice day she is out in the garden. Every day my mum watches Animal Planet.

My sister's name is Saffron, she has brown hair just like me.  My sister has 3 dogs there names are Kaya she is a husky. Zion he is a German Shepherd. Luca he is a  bellgon mulma.  My sister doesn’t live with me  she lives in Dargaville.

My other sister's name is Katana my sister was a champion at hockey and horse riding. one day my sister went to America for three years.

Reflection:
One thing I did very well is  putting  and the paragraph another thing I think I did really well  was my introduction  something I think I could do better next time is not right on My Mind Map too many keywords.

Digital pepeha

WALT:   Say our pepeha

WALT: Animate in google slides

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Two things I think I did really well were picking the background and making my family come in.
 Next time I can get clearer pictures.