WALT: organises our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or one person at a time
My family
In my family I have mum dad and two older sisters and me
My dad's name is Les my dad is a plaster, he helped to make lots of building. When he has time off work he likes to fish, sometimes he take me. my dad's like boxing he teaches Me. every night he watches boxing . my dad is from a Village in Samoa .
My mum is called Sharee She likes bees. My mum loves plants when it is a nice day she is out in the garden. Every day my mum watches Animal Planet.
My sister's name is Saffron, she has brown hair just like me. My sister has 3 dogs there names are Kaya she is a husky. Zion he is a German Shepherd. Luca he is a bellgon mulma. My sister doesn’t live with me she lives in Dargaville.
My other sister's name is Katana my sister was a champion at hockey and horse riding. one day my sister went to America for three years.
Reflection:
One thing I did very well is putting and the paragraph another thing I think I did really well was my introduction something I think I could do better next time is not right on My Mind Map too many keywords.
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