"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Mrs Lloyd.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Hi Mile your character map has my favourite colour purple so I love it good describing of her now you just need to add your picture. I wonder what she will look like?
This was probably one of the most enjoyable Character Maps I have commented on so far Mile! I think some of your comments could be moved to a more appropriate box. How Lilly "feels" may need a little more thought, eg, is she sad, lonely, forgetful, clever. One other thing, could you tell me some of the things that make Lilly such a good role model ? Keep up this wonderful mahi, ka pai !
Talofa Mile, I would love to read your story about Lily! She sounds like a lovely, respectful girl. I'm also interested to know more about what her interests and hobbies are and perhaps a little about her friends too? Like Llisa, I can't wait to see a picture of Lily as I know you enjoy drawing! Ka pai to mahi, Miss Reihana
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Hi Mile your character map has my favourite colour purple so I love it good describing of her now you just need to add your picture. I wonder what she will look like?
ReplyDeleteThis was probably one of the most enjoyable Character Maps I have commented on so far Mile! I think some of your comments could be moved to a more appropriate box. How Lilly "feels" may need a little more thought, eg, is she sad, lonely, forgetful, clever. One other thing, could you tell me some of the things that make Lilly such a good role model ? Keep up this wonderful mahi, ka pai !
ReplyDeleteTalofa Mile, I would love to read your story about Lily! She sounds like a lovely, respectful girl. I'm also interested to know more about what her interests and hobbies are and perhaps a little about her friends too? Like Llisa, I can't wait to see a picture of Lily as I know you enjoy drawing!
ReplyDeleteKa pai to mahi,
Miss Reihana