"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Mrs Lloyd.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Hi Mile, I enjoyed reading your poems. Were you able to choose which topics to write about? I liked the haiku about ice the most and your use of a metaphor comparing ice to a blanket!
Hi Mile just wondering why you put the elephant stomps through the desert. When I hear desert I think of sand dunes. (Stomping through the plains of Africa) would fit.
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Hi Mile, I enjoyed reading your poems. Were you able to choose which topics to write about? I liked the haiku about ice the most and your use of a metaphor comparing ice to a blanket!
ReplyDeleteHi Mile just wondering why you put the elephant stomps through the desert. When I hear desert I think of sand dunes. (Stomping through the plains of Africa) would fit.
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