WALT: organises our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or one person at a time
My family
In my family I have mum dad and two older sisters and me
My dad's name is Les my dad is a plaster, he helped to make lots of building. When he has time off work he likes to fish, sometimes he take me. my dad's like boxing he teaches Me. every night he watches boxing . my dad is from a Village in Samoa .
My mum is called Sharee She likes bees. My mum loves plants when it is a nice day she is out in the garden. Every day my mum watches Animal Planet.
My sister's name is Saffron, she has brown hair just like me. My sister has 3 dogs there names are Kaya she is a husky. Zion he is a German Shepherd. Luca he is a bellgon mulma. My sister doesn’t live with me she lives in Dargaville.
My other sister's name is Katana my sister was a champion at hockey and horse riding. one day my sister went to America for three years.
Reflection:
One thing I did very well is putting and the paragraph another thing I think I did really well was my introduction something I think I could do better next time is not right on My Mind Map too many keywords.
"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Mrs Lloyd. Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Friday, 3 May 2019
Digital pepeha
WALT: Say our pepeha
Two things I think I did really well were picking the background and making my family come in.
Next time I can get clearer pictures.
WALT: Animate in google slides
\Two things I think I did really well were picking the background and making my family come in.
Next time I can get clearer pictures.
Friday, 29 March 2019
Saturday, 9 March 2019
I remember when I was about two years old I got a baby goat.I named him Sunny. Me and sunny where best friends. I loved feeding his bottle.When
My big sisters rode there horses because I could not ride I would lead Sunny around.
A fun fact about me is that just two weeks ago I became an aunty, my nephew’s name is Taika. Taika had to get cut out of the my sister’s stomach.
Another interesting fact about me is that i was born in the water. My family believes this is why i love the water so much, they call me a water baby.
Something that me laugh is my dog Lily I got Lily on my 7th birthday. She makes me laugh when she chases her tail and also barks at sparrow when they fly pass. I love lily she is one of the best things that ever happened to me
Something that I like is Pink the rockstar. She is my favorite rock star, last year
I went to see her concert, it was amazing she came out on a chandelier
I must say my favorite song the fun house
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